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Arthur J. Cuak - arturo.gmolina@gmail.com my face is mrzippy@gmail.com :DD

__ **Wednesday** __ write about 2 things you love and 2 things you hate and give clear reasons. Write 3 to 4 sentences for each reason.

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I love to travel all around the world. I love to see impressive landscapes and to know another cultures. I started seriously to travel three years ago. And now I try to travel when I can and, of course, when I have enough money. I have been in Edimburogh, Glasgow, London, Amsterdam, Nice, Andorra, some towns in Portugal, New York, Marsella... and some cities of Spain.

Very good Arturo but what about the things you hate?

Arturo you haven't done the building description remember this was your first assessed writing activity.

The E mpire State Building __with everybody know__ is __one the__ most fantastic __skyscrape__ in the center of New York. It __had been__ the __most high__ building in the world for forty years. After the World Trade Center was destroyed, __this come back to be the most high__ building in New York.I __learn__ English next to it __in__ the 34th street. And you don't realize __about his big heigh untill you are near of it.__

It has more than 100 floors. It's impressive and __in every films try to show also the chrisler building__. This building __have__ a very beautiful roof. Both have one spire. On top of the building we can see the drawing done by the lights of the roof. For example, the last time, the color of the __lighs__ were red and yellow similar to the Spain flag. I love it.

One of the best things you can do is to go up to the roof of the Empire State. The view there is very impressive. From there you can see __all the island of Manhattan__ and every neighborhood of New York __so__ for example, Queens, Brooklin, Bronx and Harlem.

__It's also very important this building because this have appeared__ in a lot of films like Indenpendence Day, King Kong, Godzilla...

Inside the Empire State you can __observer__ a lot of people working in it. It __have__ sixtyfour __lift__. The __skycrapes__ of New York __have the luky__ to be in a volcanic soil. That __assure that it may not have many foundation.__

I recommend to everybody to visit this wonderful building.




 * Holidays **

I love to travel abroad. I prefer to travel to Germany or to Russian than to go around Spain. Last year I were in a lot of places in England. I have a friend that have a house there so I went with several friends to London, Edimburg, Glasgow and Stirling. I was living in a tipical house of London. It was very beautiful. During three days we visited a lot of places, such as Tower Bridge, the market of candem town, the London eye, Big Ben... so many places. Very beautiful. But the best of this journey was the William Wallace monument. I love that history. I think that it's the best film in the world :D I had tickets to watch U2 in Glasgow but I had problems that didn't allow to me to go there.

Last month I spend my holidays in Amsterdam. We smoked a little and drink a ... lot. There you can only to drink and to smoke. Food there is not very good but there are everything. The city is very beautiful. We did a tour around the city and one spanish people show us Amsterdan. She was very funny speaking about the city. I will come back.

**Rainforest Adventure**

Tom and Sally set off in the morning at 10 o'clock. They took their bag with several important things such as water or some tools. Jack and Hilary couldn't go with them because they'd had another plan for that day. They started the journey and when they were walking through the rainforest they found a big snake. They were puzzled. It was there for 10 minutes at least. It was a famous smoke. The legend say that it had belonged to the waka-waka tribe. But they got kill it that day. When they were going back to the village they lost because they was running because a panther was persecuting them for a long time. After that they realized they had forgotten a compass. They tried to hide under a stone to sleep but they couldn't due to some noises from the wild animals. They were very scared so they climbed to a tree to can sleep. Finally, next day, they got to survive eating some ants and other disgusting animals. And thanks to a friendly lion that they could rode. When Jack and Hilary found them they were making love to celebrate that they were alive. They felt jealous and, at the same time, they felt very happy to had found them. They had been in the rainforest for 2 days. The had a lie-in for the next two days to rest sufficient.