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Wednesday

I like to drive when I travel to a different country. I think the best way to know the new cities is to +++ lost for your streets and discovery places where you didn't think go. I like to play different sports, how volley-ball, indoor football and paddle. My wife like sports and she is my the perfect rival, because we do bets and when I win, in few times, I like to see how my wife pay the bet. I don't like any kind of cheese because your taste is very odd for me and many times I need to vomit all the cheese that I eat. I hate it. I'm afraid of heights,since i was child always I had +++ fear to mount in +++ lift with the transparent wall. I never go to the funfair because I'm afraid of heights,I hate it so much.

Very good Jose Manuel some interesting loves and hates. No try to correct you errors. Also please take another look at your building description as this one I will not give you the opportunity to correct your errors as it is an assessed piece.

=Building description=

The most famous monument in my city is the Puerta de Alcala. This monument is in the same Street named Alcala, because this door was the entrance for the road to Alcala. Construction began in 1599 to commemorate the arrival to the city of Margarita of Austria, wife of the king Felipe II. Charles III never liked the old door and he ordered the demolition and the building of the current door. This design was Sabatini architecture, and the new door was finished in 1778. It is inspired by Roman triumphal arches, but the Puerta de Alcalá is more elongated. It has five bays, three with arch of half point equal in height and two with low flat arch on the sides. In each of the openings it´s has a fence (true door), which was closed every day at sunset. In the center, in the attic, it has a tombstone that says in Latin: Carlos III. Year 1778. 1778. A little further up you can see the coat of arms held by Fame and a genius. It shows the integration of different materials, gray granite scultptures on the structure and Colmenar limestone white decorative elements. The sculptures are based entablature Roberto Michel and Francisco Gutiérrez. Every day thousands of tourists take thousand of photographs. One of the most famous song in Spain is dedicated to this door ,which is sung by Ana Belen and Victor Manuel.

=**World Cup**= I was watching the match at home with my wife. We were very exciting because we like sports so much. Her parents phoned before the match to talk with us and my sister in law said +++ me that Spain could __be__ win the match, because the octopus Paul was predicted that +++ Spanish team could __be__ win. During the match my neighbors are very quiet and only, when Spain won the match, my neighbors loud “que viva España”. After the match my wife said me that Spain must be winning the match because Spain is the best team in this World Cup. I think that this situation is __very difficult that occurs again in the next world cup?__, but all is possible. Today Spain is the best ,and all Spanish people __there__ are very happy for our football team.

Very Good Jose Manuel now take a look at your errors and try to correct them. Focus on your verb forms.

My last single holiday

My last holiday was in Uruguay.We went to Uruguay to get married. We went in December because in this month the summer __start__ in South America. In this month the weather is not hot,but you can go to the beach. We stayed in __a grandfather´s__ house.__They__ everyday they made us __the__ breakfast. At the evening __we are going out to dinner__.Food in Uruguay is based in meat and pasta. In the morning we dedicated to __preparate__ the wedding and in the afternoon we __go__ to the beach to relax. At nigth we went to the houses of our families to talk about our lives in Spain. We stayed for __a__ one month,and in this time we went to Buenos Aires and Brazil. We visited more cities of Uruguay how Punta del Este and Punta del Diablo. The wedding was fantastic,but this story is another __question__,that I´ll write some in other time. I´d defenitely __come__ back more times,is a fantastic country.

Great Jose Manuel keep an eye on your verb tenses...looking forward to hearing about the wedding.

Rainforest adventure

They went to the walk in the rainforest at sevent o´clock.They took a rucksack,hat and some water. Jack and Hilary decided stay in the guess house to relax in the swming pool. Means Tom and Sally were walking in the rainforest they found a map.The map seems that was drawing since many years ago. It belonged to an ancient adventure,who looking for a treasure with a lot of jewels. They decided to found this treasure and they walking into the rainforest. When they had just realized they didn´t go back to the village.And then the dark is goin on and they ligthed for sleeping. They was sleeping when suddenly heard a stranges noises,and they´ve decided to go up to a tree. The nexts days they walked in the rainforest eaten some fruits and vegetables. Jack and Hilary went to looking for Tom and Sally and they follow the sings that Tom and Sally were leaved. Finally Jack found Tom sleeping in the floor but Sally wasn´t. They has been for one week lost in the rainforest and when Tom got back to the guess house he´d have a shower.