Carmen

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Al last! The today's homework. The WORLD CUP.

I watched the football yesterday in my mother's house, with my brothers. ( I don't like very much the football ,) **I don't like football very much,** but it was an historic match. The first part of the match was very boring and I think that the netherlands's players were very dirty. When the second part of the game ended, I was very worried. I think the extra-time was the best of the match: very exciting and with a lot of (oportunity ) **opportunity** for (to do goal both, Spain and Netherland) **to score a goal, Spain and Netherland.** The referee (didn't be) **wasn't** very good, ( all of people say) **everybody says** that, but I don't understand it, because I don't know (very well the football's rules ) **the football's rules very well**. But the stamp **"patada" ¿how to write?** against Xavi Alonso was very, very strong and I suppose very painful. I'll like to see (three or four days later the chest of Xavi !) **the chest of Xavi three o four days later!** And (at ) **?** the end, Spain's (+++) **the** winner, the best of the word, for the first time.... and I hope, not the last.

Good night, Emma.

Great Carmen try to correct your errors and what about your building description? Remember this will be your first assessed writing.

15/07. My building description. My favorite buildings are Toledo's old houses. I think that this city is a very magic place, __arriving from the past__ **¿Venido del pasado?**, and I'll try to describe it. Toledo is a very antique city, __(nearly)__ **near** to Madrid, when three different cultures (christians, jews and moors) __was coexiste__**d** and with a very typical architecture. In the ancient Toledo, the streets are very narrow, very steep slope, and they have building with three or four __(flat)__ **floor**__,__ made of stone or brick and not very tall. The main entrances have very beautiful doors made of wood. In the front, the principal buildings (are) **have** coats of arms made of stone. __(It's) **There are** very typical the railings made of iron in the windons **and in the door.** (as well__). In the winter, streets are very dark, even at midday and in the summer, the sun __can't to__ reach the ground. It's __great__ and mysterious at the same __times!__ I think that one of the most impressive __building__ in Toledo is the Bisagra's door. __It receives as well the name of "imperial door".__ This is the main entrance to the city when you come from Madrid. It is a big stone's building with two circle towers and in the middle an open door. Up to the door it's a very, very (gigantic in fact) city's coat of arms. __On the top, there is a sculture: is Santiago the older and there is a church behind the door with the same name__. My friend Mercedes __was married over there__. Behind the circle towers there are two squared and sharp towers. They are made of stone too, but they have small windows (eigth in each) and in the roof you can see again the city's coat of arms but.... in color! I don't know when the door was built but I think al least __to__ the 14th or 15 th century. And I don't remember the name of the architect neither. The view when you see it from the road, is beautiful. Impressive. //NOTE: very interesting to do that without the book, only with a diccionary. But I needed a very long time! I promise you to do the recipe and correct the previous exercise tomorrow.//


 * My recipe: __Chicken with natural tomato and thyme__**


 * __Ingredients.__**
 * 3/4 Kg of chicken**
 * 1 Kg of red tomatoes**
 * Five spoonful of oliva oil**
 * Thyme, salt and pepper**

To cut up the chicken without skin in not very small pieces; six o seven piece for person and season it with salt and pepper. In a saucepan, to put five oil's spoonful and fry lightly the chicken. Take out the chicken and in the saucepan, to cup up the tomatoes in small pieces and to cook over a low heat for one hour approximately. Later, to put the chicken in the saucepan with a lot of thyme and to cook fifteen minutes more. To serve heat with green beans or baker potatoes

MY LAST HOLIDAY My last holiday was in Norway, two years ago. I went on a package holiday with a friend for ten days. We arrived by __flight__ and we used the bus __for the travel__ every day into the country and __one times__ the boat.... Every day we had an excursion: we visited the citys, the tundra, the fjord, the glacier... __impressive__ nature! Every two days we changed the hotel and it's was not very comfortable. At the hotel the food was healthy: a lot of vegetables or fruits and of course, smoked salmon.... even in the breakfast. The weather was good: only one __days was raining__ and the temperature was moderate: not very hot or cold. And it's true that in the North at midnight there was light.... The people in the country were very __indifferent__ with us: they have a lot of __tourist__ and they are __correct and quiet__, but not very friendly with us.

Good work Carmen

A STORY IN THE RAINFOREST

Wednesday in the morning, Tom and Sally set off at six o'clok.They took with them two rucksacks and the photos'camera and they went to the Amazon rainforest. Jack and Hilary didn't go with them because they were sleeping. When Tom and Sally were walking into the rainforest they found beautiful wild plants and animals, like snikes, and they took a lot of photos. The animals and plants had been there for many years and the rainforest has belonged to the Brazilian'government. They were very exciting with the nature and when they wanted back to the guest house, they got lost on because the night was become. And they had been forgotten the torch and the compass.Then, they loocked for a place to sleep and when they had trying to sleep, they heard strange sounds of the animals..... and they singed "Mamma mía" to avoid fear. Next day in the morning, they had walking again in the forest and eated food's tree for the breakfast. Jack and Hillary meanwhile, were following their footstep and finally, they found them. Tom and Sally has been two days in the rainforest and when they had got back to the guest hotel, they took a big shower and went to sleep. They have an adventure to tell his friends.

//Bye, Emma. I hope to see you soon.//

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